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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 12 December 2018

About a little boy!

Once upon a time there was a boy named Zac, he was  11 years old. He loved to play games on his XBOX. On days when he would go to school he would still play games on his device . Sometimes he would get caught and sometimes he wouldn't. When he came back home his dad goes to work and his mom would go to work too. Before they left, they would leave a note with chores and when they would come back home from work he hadn’t even finished his chores, all he did was play games. His mom and dad got sick of it.

It was a sunny morning his mom had  cooked breakfast and his dad got ready for a interview then Zac got ready for school. When Zac was ready, Zac went to the kitchen so he can have breakfast. When Zac left home he noticed something really weird because his mom does make breakfast before.  Zac ran back home as fast as he could. When he got there he saw his mom hiding Zacs XBOX ONE away. She said, your dad and I, have been working our heads off to get you a better education and what are you doing? ‘Nothing! so that is why I am taking it away.

Zac felt sorry, her walked back to school sad. When he got back home and his mom and dad were not at home. He looked at the table and saw a list of chores then Zac did all of his chores. He waited patiently for them to come back from work.When they arrived back home Zac said sorry to his mom and dad then Zac hugged his mom and dad and  went to sleep so he would be ready for school the next day.

Friday, 28 September 2018

How to play safe on the playground

We can play Sufi on the playground by not banging in to other kids and to watch out for kids when they are running around the playground also don’t run too fast before you will bump into a kid.

You should not play at a place that has too many kids because you might bump into a kid and then the kid might get angry and it will turn into a fight.If you bump into a kid you might get in trouble by the teacher or the mom or dad  and if you bump the kid then he might go and tell his mom and dad.

Duffy Assembly

Today Saint Patrick’s School went to the school hall and we had some visitors from the Duffy books. They were the people that buys  books and give them to us . There were two gentlemen and one of the men stood up and talked about how books changed his life.

His story was about how he went to the shopping mall with his mum one day.  Every time he would go there, his mum would see a friend in one of the shops. She would tell him to wait for 5 seconds while she talked to her friend.  The 5 seconds actually meant 5 hours. The next time it happened again and mom would say the same thing to me. Then it happened again and again and again that he became sick of waiting.

He decided to go to a place that had a lot of shelves with  CD covers. then he picked one of the CD covers and looked at it and he said to hem safe this looks cool  then when he opened it there was nothing so he became upset. He welk up to the frat deck and asked the lady where is the CD then the lady said to hem  it is a book not a CD. After that he read the book in the library but then until someone was distracting him by talking very loudly in the library so Henry got up and was ready to tell the person off but when he got there he tapped the person back and the person turned around and Henry looked at the person and the person looked back at him and he saw her beautiful brown long hair and her brown eyes and big juju lips and asked him what do you want in a pushy way, When it was Henry’s turn to talk he had no words coming out of his mouth so she told him to get lost.

After a few days Henry got up because he was sick of crying because he cried for 7 days and 14 hours 10 minutes and 10 seconds. He felt devastated because he liked the girl and she rejected him. Then he went back to the library and he went to look for a book.  He was surprised that some girls was there. He walked up to her and said to her can you go somewhere else because she was talking to lead an then she run off out of the library. And she cried for 7 days and 14 hours and 11 minute and 11 seconds. Everyone said to him you are sad and some kids just laughed then we took a photo  of him then we went back to class.

Monday, 2 July 2018

Facts about kangaroos!


Learning Intention: I am learning to identify key ideas and use these to writ a summary.

Friday, 29 September 2017

Not too little to help!


Learning Intention: I am learning to read.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I record a sentence story called Not too little to help.

Monday, 25 September 2017

Children need to have enough sleep so that they can focus in class!


Learning Intention: We are learning to persuade others our point of view.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I record three arguments why children under the age of 13 should be getting enough sleep using screencastify.

Monday, 12 June 2017

Mox the fox!


Learning Intention: I am learning to read.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I record an 8  sentence story called Mox the fox!.

Saturday, 6 May 2017

You can follow my recipe to make a fruit salad!


Learning Intention: We are learning to write a procedure.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I list the ingredients and the steps for making a fruit salad.

Tuesday, 11 April 2017

I want to play with my baby cousin again soon!

On Saturday it was a sunny day my baby cousin was sleeping at first. However he soon woke up and started to cry. He kept on crying. I quickly came up with the idea to shake the rattle to distract him. The rattle was blue and it was big.

After he stopped crying, I gave him some toys. I played with my baby cousin and had a lot of fun.


Learning intention: We are learning the structure of a recount.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I write the introduction, events, and a conclusion.Image result for baby